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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 31 December 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of international cricket centuries by David Boon[edit]
List of international cricket centuries by David Boon (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Zia Khan 14:15, 23 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
This list is based upon pre-existing lists of the similar type and I believe this is according to the FL criteria. Comments and suggestion are appreciated! Zia Khan 14:15, 23 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 15:35, 26 November 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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Resolved comments from —Vensatry (Ping me) 03:34, 27 December 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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Comments from —Vensatry (Ping me)
—Vensatry (Ping me) 10:29, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Additional comments (re-visit)
—Vensatry (Ping me) 11:57, 24 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support —Vensatry (Ping me) 03:34, 27 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- The only issue I can see is this: "His accomplishments with the bat during the 1993 English cricket season led to him [.....] and described him that he......" - his accomplishments with the bat didn't describe him as anything, also in English we don't "describe that" something. I would re-write the sentence to "His accomplishments with the bat during the 1993 English cricket season led to Wisden naming him as one of their Cricketers of the Year in 1994 and describing him as "the most assured batsman in the Australian team"". Hope this helps -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:44, 12 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - you missed out a word when you put my suggested revised sentence in, but I fixed that for you -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:54, 12 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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