Wikipedia:Peer review/Draughton, North Yorkshire/archive1
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Looking to see how this article can be improved further. Thanks, Cremastra (u — c) 23:26, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- My first peer review, but I'll do the best I can:
- Intro
- The first sentence probably shouldn't be a separate paragraph, as it looks quite strange and is very much related to the information given in the second paragraph.
- "The ground the parish sits on sedimentary, but of varying types." Typo here?
- The Bolton Abbey Railway Station should be mentioned somewhere outside the lead (or at the very least, have a citation).
- Heritage
- "There are several listed buildings in the parish of Draughton, including buildings and boundary stones." I don't think it would hurt to go into a little bit more detail about what the buildings are, something along the lines of "...including several houses and the Flat Bridge..."
- The hatnote could probably be replaced by linking to the page in the body directly.
- Health
- That kinda weird short sentence at the start could be maybe fixed by writing instead "In 2022, disinfection measures were temporarily introduced to a water treatment plant near Draughton..."
- Relevant source from the BBC, maybe?
- References
- "New traffic free route at Draughton helps Dales Way walkers". Craven Herald. 29 August 2024. Retrieved 15 October 2024. This reference should include author information as well.
- Based5290 :3 (talk) 07:46, 1 November 2024 (UTC)