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The article has a potential for a good article promotion. It was nominated for deletion once and copyedited by a member of GOCE. I am looking forward for some suggestions on how to further improve this article.

Thanks and all the best, FairyTailRocks (talk) 11:11, 9 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Cas Liber

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  • ...is a professional Filipino association football club, established in March 2000. - the team was established in March 2000 or the league was established then?
  • Cleared and fixed some few tweaks.
  • To this first sentence I would add "..club based in (wherever they are based)"
  • Added
  • ...when a group of football enthusiasts from Tacloban formed a weekly football practice. - I have no idea what this is supposed to mean.
  • O-kay I think I get it - they played socially once a week (?)
I will try to add more additional information as I can. But right now, I will stay with the original sentence. Thanks! FairyTailRocks (talk) 05:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]