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History of Celtic F.C.

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I know this article has it's flaws, but I'd like an independent view of it and advice on how to improve it.

Thanks, ShugSty (talk) 02:04, 16 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Cas Liber

Just saw this - a few thoughts....

I'd remove "has a long and illustrious history" - let the facts speak for themselves.

Remove choppy paras - there are some in the first section.

Remove the see also