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I've listed this article for peer review because I have developed the page quite considerably and need more assistance to get it up to scratch. I would like for the page to get FA or GA nomination at some point.

Thanks, M48SKY (talk) 10:16, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! This is my first time doing a peer review. So, another peer reviewer can identify more points.
Points of improvement I can see are:
  1. Theatrical Release Dates. See MOS:FILMRELEASE - I don't think listing each release date in every country is necessary, and the source by Event Cinemas used doesn't support any release date mentioned.
  2. Check the capitalization in reference 50 by FilmInk, see MOS:ALLCAPS
  3. References 61 and 62 use IMDB. Kindly replace them: the IMDB sources are based on Variety, a reliable source according WP:PERENNIAL. The references are duplicates - use one twice.
  4. I'm currently checking whether references are needed in the casting, but try to check for reliable sources for the cast list.
  5. Check other duplicate references
These are what I found, as far as I can know. Good hopes in your article! RFNirmala (talk) 02:43, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]