Wikipedia:Peer review/Music of Maryland/archive1

Music of Maryland

I'm hunting for photos, but other than that, I think this article is pretty good. Does anyone have any suggestions? Tuf-Kat 19:48, 25 September 2005 (UTC)

OK. Just some general problems:

1. Too many red links!!!
2. First paragraph of intro could use some lengthening
3. "Music history" - paragraphs in lead too short
4. "Folk music" - second paragraph a little short
5. "Popular music" - second paragraph a little short
6. Maybe see about moving that image someplace....
7. Could use some external links

Hope that helps, take care! Ryan Norton ^{T | @ | C} 15:19, 28 September 2005 (UTC)