Wikipedia:Peer review/Siwanoy/archive1

Siwanoy

I've listed this article for peer review because I have done a major re-write and reorganization of the article, including the addition of numerous references. It is currently rated Start class.

Thanks, Rhythmnation2004 (talk) 12:49, 20 July 2020 (UTC)

@Rhythmnation2004 looks good. I think it's easy to read and appreciate the time you've taken to provide reliable sources for parts throughout the article. I think it is probably a C-class article so have updated it. To improve the article:

• I would flesh out the lead a bit more to reflect the body in the article, and definitely include some more general content about the Siwanoy. I feel that the article is covered from a US history centric point of view (The second sentence is "By the mid-17th century, when their territory became hotly contested between Dutch and English colonial interests"), but I think they are probably independently notable themselves alone.
• More information could be included about their lifestyle, food source, clothing, population and political structure - potentially some overarching facts relating to Indian tribes in the area may be relevant
• A map could be included to help readers understand more about their locale.

Thanks for your work to this article :). Let me know if you have any questions. --Tom (LT) (talk) 04:22, 6 September 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Tom (LT), I have incorporated some of the changes you suggested. Rhythmnation2004 (talk) 14:36, 10 September 2020 (UTC)

Rhythmnation2004 looks great. --Tom (LT) (talk) 00:38, 22 September 2020 (UTC)