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I've listed this article for peer review because it's a former nominated featured article which I believe has undergone significant improvement. There is $50 on the bounty board to get this article featured, and I believe it deserves a review before being taken to the front page.

Thanks, Arran64 (talk) 07:24, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "début " this is sufficiently anglicised now for us to lose the accent.
  • "1997-present" en-dash, see WP:DASH.
  • Three dab links need to be fixed, "Bowser", "garage" and "Sonic the Hedgehog".
  • Image captions which aren't complete sentences don't need full stops.
  • Last para of "Appearance and personality" is unreferenced.
  • Similarly all of "Powers and abilities" is unreferenced.
  • Overall, there's a distinct lack of references, that may be acceptable given it's mainly "plot" stuff which usually isn't overly ref'ed, but it may well be something that is commented upon at FAC.
  • No need to link common terms like "snake" or "cellar" or "god".
  • "Production I.G.." avoid that double full stop.
  • "Wario as seen in WarioWare, Inc.: Mega Microgame$!." similarly.
  • Avoid raw URLs in the refs.
  • Author names in refs, are they First Last or Last, First? Be consistent.
  • You link GameFAQs and GameSpot but not IGN...
  • "Mario characters" is not needed as "Mario enemies" is a more refined category.

The Rambling Man (talk) 10:17, 19 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]