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 Not done Deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:10, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
Note:It's been nominated for deletion and can be discussed here. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 20:52, 4 September 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:10, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:10, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
Note: You've already listed the article previously under July. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:08, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
It says "This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments" What do i need to do please? {Valegal1 (talk) 10:29, 30 August 2018 (UTC)}
 Not done The article has been marked for speedy deletion. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 21:34, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
 Not done ...And deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 18:21, 3 September 2018 (UTC)
Nominated for deletion for the second time. Feel free to vote. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:23, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:12, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Changed history section to prose and removed some promotional content.--Madds212 (talk) 22:57, 8 August 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:12, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 18:03, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested parties. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 03:47, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:27, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Did some grammer edits in whole article.- nuetralman 10 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done I have performed a few more edits, and at this time I feel that the article is in order. North America1000 07:50, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
Seems to be fixed. Tinton5 (talk) 04:45, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
Hold on Most likely an undeclared COI contribution. I've reported this case at theConflict of Interest Noticeboard. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:11, 7 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done by volunteer editors. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 05:57, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
Nominated for deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:15, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:59, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
Page redirected. Tinton5 (talk) 05:16, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Cleaned up myself. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:23, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed 2 bare URLs, fixed 'date' error in citations. Fbpark (talk) 09:59, 4 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done. A added a link and de-orphaned the article, removing the maintenance tags requesting wikification and de-orphaning after doing so. North America1000 23:34, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done Finished myself. AmericanAir88(talk) 03:24, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested parties. AmericanAir88(talk) 01:34, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done - User:AmericanAir88 fixed the references. The article still needs help with neutrality though. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 19:15, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Struck the above entry at this time. There is a fleeting entry on the article's talk page about NPOV, but no suggestion has been presented there about what else should be included regarding the assassination attempt. North America1000 21:06, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Cut the lead artcle down to what I think is a reasonable size as well as cleaned it up a bit. --LichWizard talk 20:33, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Struck the above entry. I don't view the article as too long, particularly because almost all of its content is verified in the article. This may be the length it needs to be at relative to information about the subject that is available. North America1000 21:01, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Cleaned up reference duplication. --LichWizard talk 19:56, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
 Done. I added the template to suggest expansion from the Chinese article. I don't view the lead as too long relative to the article's length. North America1000 20:58, 15 September 2018 (UTC)

 Done --Madds212 (talk) 18:02, 21 September 2018 (UTC)

 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 16:22, 17 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done and also ported the sources from the Swedish to the English (1 and 5 appear to be dead however) TheTiksiBranch (talk) 02:53, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 12:44, 15 September 2018 (UTC)
Note: Also needs formatting and section cleanup. AmericanAir88(talk) 20:32, 17 September 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 19:45, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done added several references. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:44, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted per WP:A10. North America1000 21:13, 25 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done --LichWizard talk 19:26, 27 September 2018 (UTC)
Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 06:55, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 06:50, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 19:44, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
  • Ali Ebrahimi - Iranian film director and his first film Hot scent. I am not an expert in Iranian film industry, but both articles look like deletion candidates for me. Added tags asking for help from Project Iran members. Film director article definitely needs cleanup. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:59, 25 August 2018 (UTC)
Added translation tags. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:17, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done I went into the Portuguese articles and translated a bit. Will continue to clean up and add more information from the Portuguese article. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 06:17, 19 August 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 19:45, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed the "Ironic Prophecy" section and cleaned up the plot summary. I have not read the book, so I do not want to edit the summary too much. --Madds212 (talk) 23:00, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested parties. AmericanAir88(talk) 01:31, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 21:10, 5 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 18:35, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 21:07, 5 October 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 13:55, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 21:41, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
Note @Northamerica1000: There were comment htmls blocking the refs. AmericanAir88(talk) 16:29, 7 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 16:29, 7 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested parties. AmericanAir88(talk) 01:18, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 01:17, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 20:00, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done Reverted the edit. Even if it wasn't vandalism they removed sourced text/sources without reason, and they removed random text in the middle of sentences, making some of it unreadable. --LichWizard talk 11:58, 10 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done By User:RJFJR. Matankic (talk) 23:46, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done Cleanup complete, PROD failed. AmericanAir88(talk) 15:41, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
Note: The article is in the AFD process and this is the creator asking for help to save from deletion. AmericanAir88(talk) 15:17, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 02:11, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
 Done - added lead section, fixed spelling and grammar errors, removed redundant sentences and quotes Revirlkodlaku (talk) 23:49, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 02:13, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Fixed grammar and spelling. -- Revirlkodlaku (talk) 14:10, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done Performed additional cleanup, including general copyediting and removal of excessive or improper sourcing. Italicized filmography and added stub tag. -- sixtynine • whaddya want? • 17:06, 3 November 2018 (UTC)
 Done. I added some sources, along with a refimprove template to the Cast section. Some of the cast listed could not be verified, as per several source searches, which provided no coverage in reliable sources for most of the cast relative to the film. So, there's not much else this project can do for the article. Note that article expansion is not typically covered by this project. North America1000 22:12, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
  •  Done. I added some sources, along with a refimprove template to the Cast section because some of the cast listed could not be verified, as per several source searches, which provided no coverage in reliable sources for most of the cast relative to the film. So, there's not much else this project can do for the article. Note that article expansion is not typically covered by this project. North America1000 22:55, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
Struck the above. The article has an infobox, and it is formatted correctly. The article itself is also formatted properly. Not seeing what else needs to be done. North America1000 22:15, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
Struck the above. This sounds like a request to expand the article, which is not a focus of this project. Such requests can be made at WP:GOCER, though. North America1000 22:16, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
Note I fail to see the importance of putting this here. It is a simple stub with two sources. AmericanAir88(talk) 21:06, 5 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done. I went ahead and added sources. Every sentence in the article is now verified (as of this post). North America1000 21:58, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 03:48, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done Tony Holkham (Talk) 19:27, 5 November 2018 (UTC)
 Deleted Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 15:28, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 Done Edited grammar, removed irrelevant information.werewolf (talk) 04:44, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 03:07, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 Done - Fixed references, added stub template, added page to projects. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2018 (UTC)
Note This article is at the AFC stage and has a COI issues. AmericanAir88(talk) 00:04, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Don't waste your time on this. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:59, 8 December 2018 (UTC)

August 2018

 Partly done I made some simple grammar edits (commas and things)Aesthetic Sunset (talk) 16:42, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
 Not done I've reviewed the page and nominated it for deletion. Seems like the article was created for promotional purposes. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 04:35, 18 August 2018 (UTC)
Article was ☒N Deleted. North America1000 14:27, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Successful Deletion AmericanAir88 (talk) 17:30, 22 August 2018 (UTC)
Note on issues: Lack of notability, possible original research, needs more citations. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 19:19, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
Nominated for the deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:08, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
Deleted. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 16:11, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done by the user Derek R Bullamore AmericanAir88 (talk) 13:45, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 01:30, 19 August 2018 (UTC)
She was born in 1989. This article does not seem to need major cleanup except for a table in "discography". AmericanAir88 (talk) 13:27, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Fixed discography and confirmed age. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 23:20, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 13:43, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested parties. AmericanAir88(talk) 22:40, 24 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 20:17, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done - fixed the age bug and cleaned up a bit, removing promotional content. Much more cleanup needed. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:55, 18 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done finished cleanup and added "Notability" tag. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:40, 19 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Started cleaning up promotional material and moving around notable information to make the article slightly more readable. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 21:33, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 DoneCleaned up a few small style and spelling errors. Otherwise it looks good. Please correct me if I am wrong.--Madds212 (talk) 20:06, 10 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Did a major grammar cleanup and removed unnecessary information. Needs cleanup with the image formatting though. --Madds212 (talk) 23:38, 8 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Cleaned up the images, referencing, and style. Curiocurio talk) contribs) 15:27, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Wheatgrass#Nutritional_content -- Someone's put a line at the bottom reading "PLEASE NOTE: Some of the nutritional content linked to, in the paragraph above [13] , and mentioned, in table 1 [4] , seems dubious and/or do not appear to match a more accessible source at the USDA website.[14]."
 Done by interested party. AmericanAir88 (talk) 16:47, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Just did it myself since it wasn't an excessive amount. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 00:33, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Nominated for deletion under copyvio and advert. AmericanAir88 (talk) 13:35, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
 Not done Successful deletion AmericanAir88 (talk) 20:17, 17 August 2018 (UTC)

July 2018

 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:22, 8 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Removed promotional language and peacock words. --Madds212 (talk) 23:23, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 01:42, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Finished cleanup. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:50, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested party. AmericanAir88 (talk) 21:37, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Improved several references and added stub template. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:14, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done Finished cleanup. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:07, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
Deleted one more time. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:30, 8 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 21:07, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 21:11, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 02:10, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
COI Issue: One of the editors of this article: 72.139.201.0 has an undisclosed COI. AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:47, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done Removed all the junk and made it a simple stub. Cleaned up formatting as well. AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:43, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done by Tinton5, Northamerica1000 and myself AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:55, 6 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:05, 18 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:05, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:58, 20 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done Fixed all that. Promotional tone still needs work. AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:21, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Still needs references AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:17, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
 Done Finished clean up. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:59, 21 July 2018 (UTC)

June 2018

 Partly done I've started fixing the red in the refs section. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 04:29, 6 August 2018 (UTC)

 Done I've fixed all the red in that section. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 21:10, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed tables and split the article into two. AmericanAir88 (talk) 19:09, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

May 2018

 Partly done I tackled most of the bare URLs; some are in Russian that I'm not comfortable tackling as I can't read the language. Gave the article a good cleanup for tone and readability but it would definitely benefit from a good going-over by a Russian language reader (and ideally a Slovenian reader too). A Traintalk 10:00, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 18:56, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

April 2018

 Partly done Not notable in US but seems to be relative notable in the Arab world. I've cleaned up the promotional material and formatting, will do references as well. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 00:31, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Fixed references, which was the only thing left. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 05:07, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Criticism of Protestantism - the article is totally biased and appears to be written by only one editor (user Marax) for the sole purpose of blaming Protestantism for... well, everything (liberalism, secularism, homosexuality, decline of Western civilization, and so on). Also requires cleanup, is simply too long and lacks of any reliable source. However the worst part of it is the massive "Catholic-thumper" attack against Protestant Reformation and Protestantism as a whole, filled with hateful speech and revilement. --GenoV84 (talk) 15:16, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
@GenoV84 - This is a big job and we may get to it eventually. In the meantime please consider placing a "POV" or similar edit tag in the particular sections of the article that need one. That may encourage other editors to get started on piecemeal improvements. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 19:38, 4 July 2018 (UTC)
@Doomsdayer520: - I cleaned up the page and reverted it to a neutral state by myself, thank you very much.--GenoV84 (talk) 18:10, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
Striking per the comment directly above. The article has been copy edited quite a bit by this user relatively recently. Also, this is one of those articles that will always have people disagreeing about what should be in it, which is generally outside the scope of this project. North America1000 07:13, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 17:44, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done Other editors have worked on the necessary changes and I just did a little remaining cleanup with red links and the intro. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 03:44, 6 August 2018 (UTC)

March 2018

  • Tourism in the Philippines - advert of an article with many sections copied and pasted from other Wikipedia articles. However the worst part of it is the massive image use. 96 images as of time of posting. Continually readded and edited by IP addresses, and I'm not entirely convinced there may not be some elements of advertising in here as well. Bloated and over the top. Canterbury Tail talk 13:12, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
 Done by interested parties. IP edits seem to be over and not active anymore. AmericanAir88 (talk) 20:24, 17 August 2018 (UTC)

February 2018

Note that Draft:Labcyte was rejected for article status on 21 March. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 22:18, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
 Not done AFC submissions shouldn't be on the list. AmericanAir88 (talk) 20:22, 17 August 2018 (UTC)

December 2017

 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 16:42, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

October 2017

 Done by interested parties. AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:38, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

August 2017

 Done, outdated entry that has no more present issues AmericanAir88 (talk) 16:40, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:36, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

September 2017

November 2017

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